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Friday, June 10, 2016

The Calf's Worst Day Ever (My Presentation).


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The Calf’s Worst Day Ever.

Earlier on December, it was another beautiful sunny day on the African Savannah.  When my family started to migrate, I was happy to see my dad leading the herd like he was a proud king.  As we were walking near the lake the sun shines through the rippling water like it was a crystal lake.  Life was lonely for me because I’m the only calf in the herd but my mother cheers me up, maybe I’ll get a brother or sister some day.  As I was walking I noticed that we were in Matuna’s lion territory but they weren't there so I carried on.  When we were walking I felt nervous if Matuna was really there, I see and smell danger coming a head, but suddenly my dad stopped then he yelled ‘’ Run!’’  I ran as fast as I could, zooming through the dusty wind I looked behind me, Matuna was charging after me.

I puffed and puffed.  I slipped and I fell into the lake, I was drowning, but the lions were helping me out. I was disappointed when my parents left me I was heartbroken, but suddenly I hear a SNAP! Someone was grabbing my leg.  I noticed that a crocodile was grabbing my leg.  It felt like my bones were going to slip off and crumble into pieces. Luckily I was helped out by the lions.  At first I thought I was gonna be killed because Matuna said ‘’ Hakuna matata calf, every thing will be all ok’’ he was talking in a bad way. I shivered so much, tears were coming down I couldn't handle it. When I looked around me I saw my whole herd coming this way.  The lions heard a big THUMP!  They were ready to take out their biggest rivals ever with the buffalos, my life felt like back in WW1 but my dad has good moves. My dad tossed Matuna in the air and threw him on the ground, he was like a big silver back gorilla. Finally I was saved.

I was glad and joyful that I was saved, I had lots of scratches on my left back leg, but I was ok. I looked at my dad and I was proud to see him again and I also learned my lesson to never migrate near the lake again because that's when my past starts again.

BY: Faith

2 comments:

  1. Wow done Fsaith i like your work and can you all so comment on my blog as will cool thank you from manaia...

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    1. Hi Manaia, thank you for your feedback, next time can you proof read your comment please.

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