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Friday, March 2, 2018

More Reading Task Of Dork Diaries?!

So today I would like to share 2 more reading tasks I have done!

This one I had to do an alternative ending that is way different to the ending in the story:



And this one is my review of the story:

Dork Diaries: Frenemies Forever Review!

This is one of my favourite books I have read so far.

My favourite part in the story was when one of the mean girls called Tiffany,
fell into the fountain at school while taking a selfie. It was hilarious!

The one thing I am confused about is, the book is called Frenemies Forever.
At the end Nikki Maxwell and Mackenzie Hollister did not end up being frenemies
or even close to being friends. So, why is the book called Frenemies Forever?

Other then that, I loved the book and I can’t wait to see what's up next in the
series of books Dork Diaries!

So, I really I hope you like this and please comment on my blog if you like! <3

Thursday, November 10, 2016

My Persuasive Writing Techniques.

This term I have been doing persuasive writing, and I did dragon fruit cause its one of my favorite food.
Here is my techniques

Hook:

Do you know that the dragon fruit grows from a flower called pitaya? Yes, have you ever heard of a fruit that grows from a flower? Wow! It’s such an interesting fruit to learn about. It has vitamin C which means it can help kids with their health. Maybe some day you will find a dragon fruit and eat it and, if you eat it you will be like holy guacamoly! I love dragon fruit and that's why I picked it to make you interested in it. So read through these reasons why I like dragon fruit.


Arguments:

Dragon fruit is so yummy in my tummy, it’s slimy and wobbly in my mouth like jelly but sweeter. It taste so much like coconut but taste a tiny bit different and yes I do like coconut I live with it. The best part of a dragon fruit is that it comes in different colours like yellow, blue, pink and purple cool right!

A dragon fruit is yummy but it’s not always yummy by itself, using it with different tasty ideas makes it better. If you have any fruit at home you could make a salad or, you can make a dragon fruit smoothie with different kind of fruit and also maybe you can make a dragon fruit cake. So many ideas to choose from!

I love dragon fruit and I’m also happy that it’s a healthy fruit.  It’s so yummy it can maintain your sweet tooth which will let you feel fresh and free sugar. It has a vitamin C so it has 10% daily value so you can, have a strong body and a lot of energy. And what else can I say it’s a fruit it’s healthy for you.

Ending:

A dragon fruit actually has fat in it but, it’s a polyunsaturated fat that means it’s a good fat for you.  This fruit can help you to feel fuller for longer! This fruit also cures diabetes and it helps with blood sugar levels in Taiwan. If you should know when I first looked at a dragon fruit I was like no way I’m gonna eat that! But when I first ate it I loved it and said don’t judge a book by it’s cover. So try a DRAGON FRUIT today. I challenge you to it!

Facts & Statistics
  • The dragon fruit is a fruit because it has seeds inside and it’s called a dragon fruit.

  • This fruit also cures diabetes

  • This fruit can help you not feeling hungry again
Emotional Language
  • And what else can I say it’s a fruit it’s healthy for you.

Exaggeration

Sound Effect
  • So try a DRAGON FRUIT today. I challenge you to it!
  • Wow!

  • holy guacamoly!

Rhetorical Question
  • Do you know that the dragon fruit grows from a flower called pitaya? yes,
  • have you ever heard of a fruit that grows from a flower?
Personal Experience
  • If you should know when I first looked at a dragon fruit I was like no way I’m gonna eat that! But when I first ate it I loved it and said don’t judge a book by it’s cover.
Repetition

Rebuttal

                                                                                                                                

Thursday, August 25, 2016

My DLO Division Video 2.

W.A.L.T- use different strategies to solve division problems.



This video helped me a lot.  It shows me how to solve division problems.  It was harder for me because I had to use my 3's to solve the problem.  I am in stage 6 part 1 and I am working, on my 3 times table.  Next time I will speak clearly and go to a place that will be quieter then outside. Please give me some feedback and I hope you learned something today. 

T.F.W 

(thanks for watching)