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The buffalo’s are walking near the lake in the hot sun.
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But the lions are camouflaging on the dry grass.
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Now the lions are chasing the buffalo’s in danger.
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And one of the lions are chasing the buffalo calf near the lake.
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Now the lions has got the buffalo calf but their having a battle with the crocodile.
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Look’s like the lions win but, their is a herd of buffalo’s coming!
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Now the buffalo’s are charging for the lions to get there buffalo calf back.
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And luckily the buffalo calf is still alive thanks to the buffalo’s that was charging to the lion’s.
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| By: Faith |
Monday, May 9, 2016
My writing sequnece.
W.A.L.T: sequnece event in order.
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ReplyDeleteFaith, I like how you put the pictures in the cell with the awesome sentences well done. My favourite part is how you put interesting and fun words in the terrific sentences. Could you explain why you highlighted some of the words?
OK kiesha and thanks for the advice.
DeleteFaith' I like the way you describe your photos.
ReplyDeleteThank you Siola:)
DeleteFaith I like your sequence your words are describing what's happing very well.But I think you need to work on the highlighting because your missing some words like buffalo,lions and grass.And keep up the good work its really good.
ReplyDeleteGood job Faith! I really liked how much detail you added, they were really Juicy words. What are the highlighted words for?
ReplyDeleteThanks Trisha and I will work on that thanks.
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ReplyDeleteWow Faith I like how you added really amazing words like camouflage.
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