Reading Benny - Alternative Ending Writing!

Reading - Benny

This blog post will be showing you an alternative ending writing to a story called, Benny.

It was a task and was apart of my reading. But before I even show you the piece of writing,

I will tell you a short version of what the story is all about. It’s about a guy called Benny.

He had only one friend beside him. In the holidays, they would meet up and go to the beach

where they would do something fun or share one ice-cream between each other. There was

a jetty at the beach which is where some trouble started to happen. Apparently there was no

happy ending in this story, but I liked reading it and doing the create and share task that was

assigned for me. I hope you like this piece of writing that I have done!

Alternative Ending Writing.

Then we heard the police sirens. Surprisingly it was getting louder and louder. I looked at Benny

and he shot his eyes right back. We knew one of us was gonna have to confess to the police

officers. All I could think about was that, Benny’s reputation was gonna be ruined. He wouldn’t

be called ‘stupid’ anymore, he would be called ‘the bad kid’ or ‘the bully’.

When the police officers arrived, they got out of the car and jogged down the sand. They looked

furious of what happened. “I’m guessing there is a good explanation for this?” said the police

officer, with a very deep voice. “Yes sir, this was all-” Benny was very confident with his

words, which made me feel even more guilty to let him take all the blame. So obviously I

had to do the right thing! “-My fault!” I said while feeling very nervous. Benny looked at me and
out of nowhere he smiled.

I knew why he smiled and I grinned. He turned in with me at the police station. We both got
grounded for 2 weeks, but it was all worth it! Knowing that I have a friend that will go
down any risky path with me, is what I needed the most in life. Well, the most in a friend. (: